Wednesday, January 12, 2011

Jaka's Story: Epilogue

I don’t know that the epilogue was really necessary. Most of it is a conversation between 2 of Jaka’s maids. She’s been given her old suite, the one she had for her last year in Palnu. Since returning she has eaten and drunk very little and spends most of her time starting vacantly out the window. I felt it may have been more effective as a single path with Jaka simply looking out the window in a mirror image of an earlier panel of her 11 year old self doing the same thing.

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